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Phil Spinelli
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« on: May 13, 2009, 05:27:34 PM »

has anyone read these

*How to Write Advertising that Sells – Clyde Bedell

*How to Convert White Space into Advertising that Sells
– Clyde Bedell

if so , how would you rate/compare them

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« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2009, 10:41:39 AM »

Phil,

I'm a big Bydell fan. And judging by this post, the only one.

Here are the negatives of both - 1) The ads shown are old. 2) All the ads are focused on retail print. Not long copy.

For me, #1 is a "so what". #2 may be a legitimate beef if you want something focused on longer copy sales letter, not print retail ads.

The book will make you want to be a better writer. Bydell is passionate about copy that sells. He wrote the book because he couldn't find a decent sales focused copy book when he was teaching advertising.

The books walks you through his 30 copy stratagems arranged around the AIDCA formula for copy.

The second book, is a massive over-sized version that is a summary of his principles in the book, but detailing ad after ad and doing comparisons of good and bad ads. It is much more a work book.

I've got a client with two of "How to write advertising that sells" books sitting around that they have never once opened and read. Too bad you are not local, I could probably acquire a "reading copy" for ya.

I'm away from my office at the moment, but if you have more questions - ask, I'll get the books in front of me and walk you through them.

You posted this a while ago, so I'd also be interested if you have made a purchase yet and how you liked it.
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« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2009, 11:34:35 PM »

Dear Phil,

I own both books by Bedell.

I think both are great. The books are massive.

If you're looking for more examples of advertisements, then the second book:"How To Convert White Space..." is the way to go.

If you're looking for a more detailed approach to advertising, then the first one is the way to go.

Both books are worth their weight in gold.

I venture to say that: these books are ahead of many copywriting courses being sold today.

Clyde Bedell spends a lot of time talking about proof/conviction and how to infuse your advertising with proof and conviction. He's very methodical, too.

For instance, he recommends that you make an outline of your features and benefits, before you start to write the ad. He has a 31-point system for evaluating ads after you create them.

Before spending thousands of dollars on today's copywriting teachers, read Clyde Bedell first.

Sincerely,
Swans Paul
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